Hi, for writing this week we just have to add some more information that will make the writing more interesting. The extra thing that we had to add to the writing was a subheading .we have to add subheading so that when the reader read the story they can see the the subheading and they can read what paragraph they want so i have to add some subheading because i have not add some and we also have to writing them in paragraph so that the reader can see it clearly.
@Billy boy:Scared to go out because he doesn't want people to come into his house.
@To the Bears:Sorry for what happened to your house and what they did to it if you need something that can help you guys out like money or something else that you might need.
#Creep in the street
#Young people can't control themselves
#Do the thing that is not good for them
@Tom silly:Scared to tell anyone because he doesn't want the community to know about it.
@To the community:I am sorry to the people that have heard this and I hope that you will not do the same thing, if you want us to fix it just tell us and what do you need from us to help you.
#Letting the other people know
#People telling them to stop
#They should not be doing this
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